Letter · 1888

To A. S. Lazarev, 20 October 1888. Moscow.

А. С. ЛАЗАРЕВУ (ГРУЗИНСКОМУ), 20 октября 1888 г. Москва.

Headnote

1 Written from Moscow on 20 October 1888 to Alexander Semyonovich Lazarev (who wrote under the pen name "Gruzinsky"), the young humorist and fellow "Oskolki" contributor Chekhov had already been advising and promoting through 1888. Lazarev had evidently written to congratulate Chekhov – likely on the recently awarded Pushkin Prize for his story collection "In the Twilight" – prompting Chekhov both to reflect wryly on his own literary standing and to give Lazarev a blunt craft critique of his own recent work.

2 Chekhov thanks Lazarev for his congratulations and denies ever having called him a flatterer, then turns self-deprecating about the risk that any prolific writer – himself very much included – runs of writing himself out; he credits the prize less to his own lasting work, which he expects to be forgotten within years, than to having opened a path to the "thick journals" that other writers, presumably including Lazarev, can now also follow toward literary respectability. He reports that their mutual colleague Yezhov has sent in another "Saturday piece" for "New Times," praises the middle section of Lazarev’s own recent "Saturday piece" (a mother teaching a girl), tells him not to have bothered with return postage, and notes he has passed the manuscript along to Suvorin’s son, currently in Moscow. He asks, half-teasingly, why Lazarev decided against publishing under his own surname (as opposed to his pen name "Gruzinsky"), and urges him to work faster before his moment passes. The letter’s core is an extended craft critique (NB, section 11): Chekhov diagnoses Lazarev’s besetting fault as an excessive caution – over-polishing his prose and hedging bold or sharp phrasing behind parentheses and quotation marks – and recommends the em-dash as the properer tool for asides. He singles out the writers Nefedov and (to a lesser degree) Boborykin as examples of the untalented over-user of scare quotes, and warns Lazarev against imitating the humorist Bilibin’s overly whimsical, old-womanish tone, urging him instead toward a freer, more masculine directness in his descriptions of both women and nature. He closes with good wishes, regards to Lazarev’s wife, and a note on his own health.

20 October 1888. Moscow.
20 октября 1888 г. Москва.
20 October.
20 октябрь.
Thank you, dearest Alexander Semyonovich, for your congratulations. As far as I recall, I never called you a flatterer, nor did I dispute you; I only told you that even great writers are subject to the risk of writing themselves out, of growing tiresome, of losing their bearings and being retired from circulation. I myself am subject to this risk in the highest degree, which you, being an intelligent man, will not, I hope, try to deny. In the first place, I am "fortune’s baseborn favorite"; in literature I am a Potemkin who sprang up out of the bowels of "Razvlechenie" and "Volna," a bourgeois turned gentleman, and such people do not hold out long, any more than a string holds out when it is stretched too hastily. In the second place, the train most at risk of jumping the rails is the one that runs every day, without stops, regardless of weather or how much fuel it has.
Спасибо Вам, добрейший Александр Семенович, за поздравление. Насколько помню, льстецом я Вас никогда не обзывал и Вас не оспаривал; я говорил Вам только, что и великие писатели бывают подвержены риску исписаться, надоесть, сбиться с панталыку и попасть в тираж. Я лично подвержен этому риску в сильнейшей степени, чего Вы, как умный человек, надеюсь, отрицать не станете. Во-первых, я "счастья баловень безродный", в литературе я Потемкин, выскочивший из недр "Развлечения" и "Волны", я мещанин во дворянстве, а такие люди недолго выдерживают, как не выдерживает струна, которую торопятся натянуть. Во-вторых, наибольшему риску сойти с рельсов подвержен тот поезд, который идет ежедневно, без остановок, невзирая ни на погоду, ни на количество топлива...
Of course, the prize is a great thing, and not for me alone. I am happy to have shown the way for many to the thick journals, and I am now no less happy that, thanks to me, those same many can count on academic laurels. Everything I have written will be forgotten in five or ten years; but the paths I have laid down will remain intact and unharmed – that is my sole merit.
Конечно, премия – большая штука и не для меня одного. Я счастлив, что указал многим путь к толстым журналам, и теперь не менее счастлив, что по моей милости те же самые многие могут рассчитывать на академические лавры. Всё мною написанное забудется через 5–10 лет; но пути, мною проложенные, будут целы и невредимы – в этом моя единственная заслуга.
Yezhov is a fine fellow. He has already sent off another "Saturday piece."
Ежов молодец. Он послал уже другой "субботник".
Your "Saturday piece" appealed to me, especially the middle part, where the mother teaches the girl.
Ваш "субботник" мне симпатичен, особенно середка, где мать учит девочку.
You needn’t have enclosed the stamps.
Напрасно Вы приложили марки.
I handed your "Saturday piece" to Suvorin the younger, who is now staying in Moscow.
Ваш "субботник" вручил я Суворину-фису, который пребывает теперь в Москве.
Why did you decide against signing yourself Lazarev?
Отчего Вы раздумали подписаться Лазаревым?
I like your stories; every year you write better and better, that is, more talented and more intelligent. But you risk being late. You must hurry. If you do not go at a forced march, you will miss your chance: others will take your place.
Мне Ваши рассказы нравятся; с каждым годом Вы пишете всё лучше и лучше, т. е. талантливее и умнее. Но Вы рискуете опоздать. Надо торопиться. Если Вы не пойдете форсированным маршем, то прозеваете: Ваше место займут другие.
NB. Your failing: in your stories you are afraid to give free rein to your temperament, afraid of impulses and mistakes, that is, of the very thing by which talent is recognized. You lick and polish things too much; whatever seems to you bold and sharp, you hasten to enclose in parentheses and in quotation marks (for instance, "At the Manor"). For heaven’s sake, do away with both the parentheses and the quotation marks! For parenthetical remarks there is an excellent mark, the double dash (– so-and-so –). Quotation marks are used by two sorts of writers: the timid and the untalented. The first are frightened by their own boldness and originality, while the second (the Nefedovs, and Boborykin to some degree), by enclosing some word in quotation marks, mean to say: look, reader, what an original, bold, and new word I have thought up!
NB. Ваш недостаток: в своих рассказах Вы боитесь дать волю своему темпераменту, боитесь порывов и ошибок, т. е. того самого, по чему узнается талант. Вы излишне вылизываете и шлифуете, всё же, что кажется Вам смелым и резким, Вы спешите заключить в скобки и в кавычки (напр "В усадьбе"). Ради создателя, бросьте и скобки и кавычки! Для вводных предложений есть отличный знак, это двойное тире (– имярек – ). Кавычки употребляются двумя сортами писателей: робкими и бесталанными. Первые пугаются своей смелости и оригинальности, а вторые (Нефедовы, отчасти Боборыкины), заключая какое-нибудь слово в кавычки, хотят этим сказать: гляди, читатель, какое оригинальное, смелое и новое слово я придумал!
And don’t you imitate Bilibin! One must be manly, strong, whereas you, in your descriptions of honeymoons and the like, lapse into the sentimentally playful, little-old-lady tone characteristic of Bilibin. That won’t do. Your descriptions of nature are not bad; you do well to be wary of pettiness and officialese. But again, you do not give your temperament free rein. That is why you have no originality of method. Women must be described so that the reader feels you are in an unbuttoned waistcoat and without a necktie; the same goes for nature. Give yourself freedom.
И не подражайте Вы Билибину! Надо быть мужественным, сильным, а Вы в описаниях медового месяца и т. п. вдаетесь в сантиментально-игриво-старушечий тон, свойственный Билибину. Не надо этого... Описания природы у Вас недурны; Вы хорошо делаете, что боитесь мелочности и казенщины. Но опять-таки Вы не даете воли своему темпераменту. У Вас нет поэтому оригинальности в приемах. Женщин нужно описывать так, чтобы читатель чувствовал, что Вы в расстегнутой жилетке и без галстуха, природу – то же самое. Дайте себе свободы.
Keep well. My regards to your wife. I am alive and in good health.
Будьте здоровы. Поклон Вашей жене. Я жив и здрав.

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