To N. M. Yezhov, 28 January 1890. Petersburg.
Н. М. ЕЖОВУ, 28 января 1890 г. Петербург.
Headnote
Written in Petersburg on 28 January 1890, in the weeks before Chekhov’s departure for Sakhalin, to Nikolai Mikhailovich Ezhov (1862–1941), a younger writer and journalist whom Chekhov had befriended and was mentoring in this period; Ezhov was placing work through Chekhov’s connection to Alexey Suvorin’s newspaper Novoye Vremya ("New Times").
The letter is business-plus-craft-advice, typical of Chekhov’s dealings with junior writers he took seriously. He apologizes for a delayed reply (he had hoped to answer in person on a trip to Moscow that did not happen), then works through three numbered items: Ezhov’s story "The Water-Nymph" (Русалка) will run in Novoye Vremya; his per-line rate has been raised to 8 kopecks; and instructions have been given to send Ezhov his copy of the paper. Chekhov then gives substantive feedback on the story – he liked it, noting real progress, but flags that in the passage narrated by the water-nymph’s father, Ezhov’s prose drifts toward the manner of Vladimir Korolenko’s "The Forest Murmurs" (Лес шумит). He follows with craft advice characteristic of his letters to younger writers: Ezhov’s language tends toward coarseness and ornateness, and he should read more, particularly serious/nonfiction prose with stricter, more disciplined language than fiction typically has, both to train his ear and to accumulate knowledge useful to a writer. Chekhov calls this "a sermon for dessert," self-deprecating about the length of the advice. He closes with a note that Suvorin apologizes for the delay on the newspaper subscription, sends respects to Ezhov’s wife, signs off, and adds a brief closing question asking whether Ezhov sees "our people" – i.e. their shared literary/journalistic circle – at all.