Letter · 1890

To N. M. Yezhov, 28 January 1890. Petersburg.

Н. М. ЕЖОВУ, 28 января 1890 г. Петербург.

Headnote

Written in Petersburg on 28 January 1890, in the weeks before Chekhov’s departure for Sakhalin, to Nikolai Mikhailovich Ezhov (1862–1941), a younger writer and journalist whom Chekhov had befriended and was mentoring in this period; Ezhov was placing work through Chekhov’s connection to Alexey Suvorin’s newspaper Novoye Vremya ("New Times").

The letter is business-plus-craft-advice, typical of Chekhov’s dealings with junior writers he took seriously. He apologizes for a delayed reply (he had hoped to answer in person on a trip to Moscow that did not happen), then works through three numbered items: Ezhov’s story "The Water-Nymph" (Русалка) will run in Novoye Vremya; his per-line rate has been raised to 8 kopecks; and instructions have been given to send Ezhov his copy of the paper. Chekhov then gives substantive feedback on the story – he liked it, noting real progress, but flags that in the passage narrated by the water-nymph’s father, Ezhov’s prose drifts toward the manner of Vladimir Korolenko’s "The Forest Murmurs" (Лес шумит). He follows with craft advice characteristic of his letters to younger writers: Ezhov’s language tends toward coarseness and ornateness, and he should read more, particularly serious/nonfiction prose with stricter, more disciplined language than fiction typically has, both to train his ear and to accumulate knowledge useful to a writer. Chekhov calls this "a sermon for dessert," self-deprecating about the length of the advice. He closes with a note that Suvorin apologizes for the delay on the newspaper subscription, sends respects to Ezhov’s wife, signs off, and adds a brief closing question asking whether Ezhov sees "our people" – i.e. their shared literary/journalistic circle – at all.

28 January 1890. Petersburg.
28 января 1890 г. Петербург.
28 Jan.
28 янв.
Dearest Nikolai Mikhailovich, forgive me for taking so long to answer your letters. I kept meaning to go to Moscow and was counting on seeing you and answering in person.
Добрейший Николай Михайлович, простите, что так долго не отвечал на Ваши письма. Всё собирался уехать в Москву и поэтому рассчитывал повидаться и дать ответ устный.
1) "The Water-Nymph" will be printed in "Novoye Vremya."
1) "Русалка" будет напечатана в "Новом времени".
2) You’ve been given a raise of a kopeck. Now you’ll be getting 8 kopecks a line.
2) Вам прибавлена копейка. Теперь Вы будете получать 8 коп. за строчку.
3) Instructions have been given about sending you the paper.
3) О высылке газеты сделано распоряжение.
I liked "The Water-Nymph" very much, though in the telling of the water-nymph’s father you slip a little into Korolenko’s manner ("The Forest Murmurs"). On the whole you’re visibly making progress, which, honestly, makes me very glad. Read more; you need to work on your language, which suffers in you from a certain coarseness and floweriness – in other words, you need to cultivate in yourself a taste for good language, the way one cultivates a taste for engravings, good music, and so on. Read more serious books, where the language is stricter and more disciplined than in fiction. You’ll pick up knowledge along the way too, which isn’t superfluous for a writer.
"Русалка" мне очень понравилась, хотя в рассказе русалочьего отца Вы несколько впадаете в тон Короленко ("Лес шумит"). Вообще Вы заметно прогрессируете, чему я, искренно говоря, очень рад. Читайте побольше; Вам нужно поработать над своим языком, который грешит у Вас грубоватостью и вычурностью – другими словами, Вам надо воспитать в себе вкус к хорошему языку, как воспитывают в себе вкус к гравюрам, хорошей музыке и т. п. Читайте побольше серьезных книг, где язык строже и дисциплинированнее, чем в беллетристике. Кстати же запасетесь и знаниями, которые не лишни для писателя.
So there’s your sermon for dessert!
Вот Вам и наставление на закуску!
Suvorin apologizes for not having given instructions about the paper until now.
Суворин извиняется, что до сих пор не распорядился насчет газеты.
My respects to your wife.
Почтение Вашей жене.
Sincerely devoted,
Искренно преданный
Do you see our people at all?
Бываете ли у наших?

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