Letter · 1887

To M. V. Kiseleva, 7–8 July 1887. Babkino.

М. В. КИСЕЛЕВОЙ, 6, 7 или 8 июля 1887 г. Бабкино.

Headnote

1 Written 6, 7, or 8 July 1887 at Babkino, the country estate near Voskresensk where the Chekhov family spent several summers as guests of the Kiselev family. The addressee, Maria Vladimirovna Kiseleva, was the lady of the house, a family friend of literary ambitions who dabbled in writing fiction for children and occasionally sought Chekhov’s professional opinion of her work; he had by 1887 the established habit of reading her drafts and answering with blunt, joking literary criticism.

2 The letter is a compact piece of editorial banter: Chekhov gives a brief verdict on Kiseleva’s story "Agnia," judging it imperfect in style but genuine and worth more than a rival piece he calls "Stray Bullets," then brushes off some offer of intercession with an editor named Istomin with a dry joke about brides and bad journals. The closing lines pivot into a short, morbid quip – turning the title "Stray Bullets" back on itself as a mock remedy for toothache and lovesickness – followed by a curt dismissal of another character or manuscript, "Vasilisa," that Chekhov declines to take on. The whole note displays Chekhov’s characteristic mode with Kiseleva: affectionate, unsparing, and compressed into a handful of lines.

6, 7, or 8 July 1887. Babkino.
6, 7 или 8 июля 1887 г. Бабкино.
If the language of your "Agnia" is not sustained throughout, still it makes a very definite impression, and one can see that it was suffered into being by its author. It’s not a bad story, and it’s worth a thousand "Stray Bullets." Your intercession strikes me as unnecessary; it would come in handy if Istomin were not the editor of a bad journal but a rich bride.
Если у моей "Агнии" язык не выдержан, то зато она дает впечатление весьма определенное и видно, что она выстрадана автором. Рассказ недурной и стоит тысячи "Шальных пуль". Ваша протекция мне кажется излишней; она сгодилась бы, если бы Истомин был не редактором плохого журнала, а богатой невестой.
Ready to be of service,
Готовый к услугам
For toothache and for love, a stray bullet fired into the temple helps. Such a bullet makes a definite impression. In your Vasilisa, life and the mind are one and the same: I decline.
От зубной боли и любви помогает шальная пуля, пущенная в висок. Такая пуля дает определенное впечатление. У Вашей Василисы жизнь и голова одинаковы: я отказываюсь.

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