Letter · 1889

To M. V. Kiseleva, 3 December 1889. Moscow.

М. В. КИСЕЛЕВОЙ, 3 декабря 1889 г. Москва.

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Letter to Maria Vladimirovna Kiseleva, 3 December 1889, Moscow.

Maria Kiseleva (1847-1921) was a minor writer and the co-owner, with her husband, of the Babkino estate near Voskresensk, where the Chekhov family spent several summers (1885-1887) as tenants/guests. She and Chekhov maintained a long, warmly bantering correspondence; she was also the addressee of his well-known January 1887 letter defending frank/"dirty" subject matter in literature. By December 1889 Chekhov was back in Moscow, recently returned from the period around his brother Nikolai’s death (June 1889) and at work on what would become "A Dreary Story" and other pieces; he was also unwell with influenza at the time of writing.

A short, teasing letter. Prince A. I. Urusov (referred to jestingly as sending "some goose" of an emissary) publishes a hunting journal and had asked Chekhov, through an intermediary, for a short story; Chekhov refused, with mock-grandiose self-comparison to Mount Elbrus as the only other "unattainable height" in Russia. He then recommends Kiseleva to the emissary as a hunting-literate fiction writer, claiming (in jest) that she is consumed with envy of his fame and dreams of a monument to herself. He suggests two possible story titles/ideas – "Ivan Gavrilov" and "The Wounded Elk" – and gives craft advice: treat the wounded-animal subject in a flat, "protocol"/police-report style, without sentimentality, or it will lose its power. He instructs her, if she accepts Urusov’s commission, to demand 80-100 rubles per printer’s signature (list) as her fee – the standard journal rate – framed as a joking postscript she should append. He closes asking whether she is recovering (from illness), reports his own influenza, sends greetings to named family members, and closes with a family greeting from the whole Chekhov household.

3 December 1889. Moscow.
3 декабря 1889 г. Москва.
3 December.
3 декабрь.
Much-esteemed Maria Vladimirovna!
Многоуважаемая Мария Владимировна!
This morning some goose from Prince Urusov turned up at my place and asked me for a short story for the hunting journal published by the aforesaid prince. Naturally I refused, as I refuse everyone who comes crawling with entreaties to the foot of my pedestal. There are now two unattainable heights in Russia: the summit of Elbrus, and I.
Сегодня утром явился ко мне некий гусь от кн. Урусова и просил у меня небольшой рассказ для охотничьего журнала, издаваемого оным князем. Конечно, я отказал, как отказываю всем, прибегающим с мольбами к подножию моего пьедестала. В России есть теперь две недосягаемые высоты: вершина Эльборуса и я.
Having received my refusal, the princely envoy grew deeply grieved, nearly died of sorrow, and in the end fell to imploring me to recommend to him some fiction writers acquainted with hunting. I thought it over, and very opportunely recalled a certain authoress who dreams of a monument and has for a year now been ill with envy of my literary fame. In short, I gave him your address, and one of these days you will receive an invitation to send in, by January, a hunting story – short, of course, full of poetry and all manner of beauties. You have observed the hunt with hounds, the Pskov men and so on more than once, and it will not be hard for you to contrive something suitable. For instance, you might write a sketch called "Ivan Gavrilov" or "The Wounded Elk" – in the latter story, if you haven’t forgotten, hunters wound an elk, she looks at them with a human gaze, and no one can bring himself to finish her off. It’s not a bad subject, but a dangerous one, in that it is hard to guard against sentimentality; one must write it in the manner of a police report, without pathetic words, and begin like this: "On such and such a date, hunters wounded a young elk in the Daraganovsky forest"... And if you let slip even a little tear, you will rob the subject of its severity and of everything in it that is worth attending to...
Получив отказ, княжеский посол сильно опечалился, едва не умер с горя и в конце концов стал умолять меня рекомендовать ему писателей-беллетристов, знакомых с охотою. Я подумал и очень кстати вспомнил об одной писательнице, которая мечтает о монументе и вот уж год как больна от зависти к моей литературной славе. Короче говоря, я дал Ваш адрес, и на днях Вы получите приглашение прислать к январю охотничий рассказ, конечно, небольшой, полный поэзии и всяких красот. Вы не раз наблюдали охоту с гончими, псковичей и проч., и Вам не трудно будет создать что-нибудь подходящее. Например, Вы могли бы написать очерк "Иван Гаврилов" или "Раненая лось" – в последнем рассказе, если не забыли, охотники ранят лось, она глядит по-человечьи, и никто не решается зарезать ее. Это недурной сюжет, но опасный в том отношении, что трудно уберечься от сантиментальности; надо писать его протокольно, без жалких слов, и начать так: "Такого-то числа охотники ранили в Дарагановском лесу молодую лось"... А если пустите немножко слезы, то отнимете у сюжета его суровость и всё то, что в нем достойно внимания...
I am teaching you how to write. You will say: what impudence! So be it. You cannot imagine what a delight it is to feel oneself great and to gloat over the envious!
Я учу Вас, как писать. Вы скажете: это дерзость! Пусть так. Вы не можете себе представить, какое наслаждение сознавать себя великим и злорадствовать над завистниками!
In case Urusov sends you the invitation and you agree, then in your reply letter do not forget to add the following P.S.: "As for my terms, for your journal I shall make no exceptions, and shall charge you 80–100 rubles a signature – the usual journal fee."
В случае, если Урусов пришлет Вам приглашение и Вы согласитесь, то в ответном письме не забудьте сделать следующий P. S.: "Что касается моих условий, то для Вашего журнала я не буду делать исключений и возьму с Вас 80–100 руб. за лист – обычный журнальный гонорар".
Is it not time for you to be getting well?
Не пора ли Вам выздоравливать?
I have a regular case of influenza.
У меня форменная инфлуэнца.
Give my heartfelt greetings to Alexei Sergeyevich, Vasilisa, and Elizaveta Alexandrovna.
Передайте мой сердечный привет Алексею Сергеевичу, Василисе и Елизавете Александровне.
Devotedly yours
Душевно преданный
My whole family bows to you.
Вся моя фамилия кланяется.

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