To A. S. Kiselev, 8 December 1891. Moscow.
А. С. КИСЕЛЕВУ, 8 декабря 1891 г. Москва.
Headnote
Written from Moscow on 8 December 1891 to Alexei Sergeyevich Kiselev, the master of the Babkino estate the Chekhov family had rented for three summers and Chekhov’s longtime friend, this letter is mock-formal from its opening line: Chekhov addresses him with the elevated civil-service honorific "Your Honor" and signs off in the same jocular high style, the two of them clearly sharing a running joke about rank and ceremony.
Underneath the tone, the business is real. Kiselev, or his family, appear to have sent Chekhov an unpublished play by a deceased or absent relative for his professional opinion, and Chekhov – with the seasoned eye of a working dramatist and story writer who knew the censor’s habits well – delivers a frank verdict: too long, too talky for a one-act piece, and, worse, politically unpublishable. Its adultery plot, its refusal to let good triumph over evil, its "immoral Excellency," and its casual use of the word "minister" would guarantee the censor’s rejection outright. Chekhov offers to forward a formal petition to the censorship office himself if the family wants to gamble two revenue stamps on it, and, in the unlikely event of approval, name-checks two real contacts who could get it staged: the Moscow theater manager Korsh and Vladimir Nemirovich-Danchenko, then serving on the state Theatrical-Literary Committee that vetted plays for the imperial stage.
The letter closes with the mixture of tenderness and needling typical of Chekhov’s Kiselev correspondence: sympathy for Maria Vladimirovna Kiseleva over an unspecified illness and a private grief (the death of one Vladimir Petrovich, otherwise unidentified in this corpus), a wistful wish to visit Babkino that Chekhov doubts he can act on given his workload and an impending trip to Petersburg, a request for money, and bows to the household – Vasilisa Panteleyevna, Yelizaveta Alexandrovna, and the local priest, Father Fyodor – capped by a comic fantasy of lottery winnings distributed as church donations and a loan to Kiselev himself.